Jorgenn Mills Char bio

Work in progress, could use some help with this.
ITT: Shitty character bio

Chaotic neutral
Evil< ████████| ████████>Good

Sanity
Feral<███████|█████|██████>Clear
"My bag of marbles is still full"


Name:Jorgenn Mills
Faction:Loners
Age: 32
Weight:180Ibs
Height:6'0
Overall Disposition:Serious
Hair Color: Brown
Eye Color: Amber
Status: Alive
Rank:Rookie
Mental Illnesses:None
Physical Disabilities:None
Abilities:Knows Krav Maga
Motto:"Death is a part of the zone, Learn of the zone and you learn of death"

Stalker Relations
Brethren/Friend/Neutral/Mixed/Disliked/Hated/Feared
Sophia(Left the zone)-This girl came to my rescue, I feel like I can trust this one to anything.
Bloodsuckers-Sons of bitches fucked up my leg, had to get a crane to get it out
Trinity 'WhiteKnight' Hilton-T-this girl is way too much for me to handle, keeping my distance.